I dunno
This got into Daily?? AND SECOND PLACE??
ok i must agree that the animation was ok,
But the story just doesnt fit, you said not to critisice on youre story.
if everyone would say that.... then after a while people will post more stuff like this telling others to not be so cruel,
if you once want a REAL story with actual Characterbackgrounds and stuff then keep your work up,
you do have the potential to be a good artist...
-Diraiba